Community Trust
 Otama School
 12 McBain road
 RD3 Gore

 Dear Community Trust

 Otama school deserves a new playground I think our school deserves a new playground because we are a small school of 21 and we don’t have enough money to buy our own one. Another reason we deserve the money for a new playground is we are a small school, but we still have kids in it and it would make them very happy to have a new one.

 Our playground is very old and might not be safe. We won’t have to worry about health and safety with a new one. A new bright and safe playground would make the school more fun. It’s not fun breaking bones on something that isn't safe or stable though.

 A new playground would make more kids want to play on it. Therefore the kids would get more exercise. Children from other schools might drive past and want to come to our school. Exercise is a great thing, if we had no playground we would not get as much exercise as we could.

 I hope this will make you give us money for a new playground.

Yours sincerely
 Nicole McBain